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Post by Darth Ryo on Mar 29, 2008 3:17:09 GMT 1
Name: Ryo Hazuki Speciality: The force Height: 6"2 Age:21 Bio: Ryo Hazuki uses a martial arts style known as Hazuki Style , which was created by his father, Iwao Hazuki. Iwao taught Ryo Hazuki the style since he was a little boy. Ryo Hazuki can be seen practicing Hazuki Style of Martial Arts in the dojo. Also, Fukuhara has trained in the style, as he was a fellow student of Ryo's father. He also has a strong grasp of the force. He's not particularly brilliant with weapons however, including the lightsaber. Description: 6"2 dark brown hair, short and spikey looks like this
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Post by Darth Kael on Mar 29, 2008 16:00:15 GMT 1
Your character should have an age. Also, what do you mean by flashbacks.
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Post by Darth Ryo on Mar 30, 2008 2:27:52 GMT 1
Apologies, I meant dojo but was thinking of other things.
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Post by Darth Asmodous on Mar 30, 2008 2:39:05 GMT 1
Shenmue right? Ace game. I still can't get past the third disk XD
I think it's fine.
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Post by Darth Kael on Mar 30, 2008 13:25:48 GMT 1
Ok Ryo. Please show me your writing skills.
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Post by Darth Ryo on Apr 1, 2008 16:34:21 GMT 1
Umm ok.
The metal of my sword made the same usual grating sound as I pulled it out of the scabbard, the wind whistled in my ears, and there was a distinct smell of the Saiyans hanging, bitter in the air. The huge broadsword glinted in the sun, a shadow passed over the blade and I threw myself around with my sword already sweeping down towards the neck of the Saiyan, my son’s sword met my own and I felt a huge gaping hole inside myself, this man had killed my son. Anger immediately filled that hole and I put my grief to one side for later. I brought my sword back and kicked the man solidly in the chest; he staggered back with a startled look. I stood up and slid my sword into its scabbard and then took the scabbard out of my belt and dropped it, a small cloud of dust rose from the place it had dropped.
The man ran at me, my son’s sword screaming round his head, I closed my eyes and spread my feet to shoulder width and opened my hands. A grin spread across my face as the man came closer; I started to drag some power up. I was going to destroy the bastard. The man skidded to a halt about a metre away from me, staring. I spoke to this insignificant creature with disgust. “Why have you stopped Saiyan?” The man continued staring so I opened my eyes. The man threw the sword away and it landed a good hundred metres away. I knew not to underestimate this Saiyan as that sword weighed a lot. The Saiyan used his disgusting mouth to say, “Was that your son’s sword? He was a challenge but not too much. I nearly broke into a sweat!” Anger changed to fury and I wanted to just obliterate this man now, my inner beast was howling to kill this worthless specimen. The Saiyan laughed and threw off his mask and top, my eyes widened as I saw the scar I made on his chest all those years ago, the destroyed skin tissue in a line across the toned man’s chest. When I spoke my voice was a whisper, “Gennosuke Saiyan, the leader of the scum of the earth, the Saiyans. I had hoped that you were dead.” He laughed and launched his first attack.
WIll that do?
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Post by Darth Asmodous on Apr 1, 2008 16:36:17 GMT 1
hokay then... OCD on the writing skills?
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Post by Gergere on Apr 3, 2008 12:32:06 GMT 1
Ah, Ryo.. do I know you from somewhere?
*bump* Kael...
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Post by Darth Kael on Apr 3, 2008 17:24:19 GMT 1
Very good writing skills. But they have to do with starwars. I will let this one go.
Your accepted!!
Also Asmodous, don't make fun of OCD.
Ryo please make your Personal text a quote from starwars.
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Post by Gergere on Apr 3, 2008 17:36:09 GMT 1
Lol, I thought he meant Out Character Discussion.
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Post by Darth Ryo on Apr 4, 2008 11:18:55 GMT 1
Sorry you just said writing skills =D
My names ryknig lol, ryo is my character name.
Come back here could be a quote form starwars...?
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Post by Darth Asmodous on Apr 4, 2008 11:20:00 GMT 1
Also Asmodous, don't make fun of OCD. Out of Character Description lol.
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Post by Darth Kael on Apr 4, 2008 18:06:10 GMT 1
LOL!! That's hilarious!!! Oh my!!!
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Post by Darth Ryo on Apr 5, 2008 21:14:56 GMT 1
LOL!! That's hilarious!!! Oh my!!! umm what you laughing at?
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Post by Darth Archeon on Apr 13, 2008 15:21:33 GMT 1
hey ryo saber color?
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